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wasted redoux by sentimentalcannibal wasted redoux by sentimentalcannibal
model :iconulvine:

the idea that we started shooting the photos was that we wanted to show the corpse, possibly a victim of the crime left on the rails so that the next train would "clean up" the traces leading to the murderer.

later it came to me, that it looks like a broken doll somebody threw out when it's no longer needed.

choose your own interpretation, i'm curious what's your story...

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Given 2012-12-05
wasted redoux by =sentimentalcannibal ( Suggested by tenchibaka and Featured by DistortedSmile )
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This is an incredibly moving photograph; it lulls me into a daydream where I try to imagine what this red shoed, polka dotted dressed girl is doing laying on those tracks....did she jump off her train? Did she see off a lover? Is she accepting the idea of death peacefully?
The model's expression is perfect for sparking my imagination because it really is impossible to gauge just what she is feeling. She could be looking up to the sky in a dazed stupor, she could be praying to her god up in the clouds. She makes me think 'I wish I knew what is going on inside your head' and to me, that shows just how talented you are.
Also, this photo has been taken at the exactly perfect angle. She is the subject, but she would be lost if there were any other background.
Exceedingly brilliant job.
Sincerely,
-Ashenta
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voremenow Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
I like your take on the murder. I think the murderer is going to get nabbed. First the tracks get little use. this suggests that some one will come by and find the body.
Even if a train comes by unless the head gets mangled there will be dental records to be used for identificaton.
The body is resting low so there may be enough clearence so it may not be draged along and get ripped apart. The hands an feet may be only removed. Should it be a slow moving train, there should be there will be enough time to stop. So another sick twisted perp removed from society. Life in prison no parol.
Nice work!
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sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I like how you developed the story, thank you!
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voremenow Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
This was easy. the ay your model is dressed I would title the story A valintines day gone wrong. I like to think she helod her breath topass out and fake death. She's too pretty. i want her to get away.
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:iconnamzio:
namzio Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
do you know where all the things from train toilet go? yeah...
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wiem. A wiesz, że w pociągach towarowych nie ma kibelków? Bo inne po tych torach nie jeżdżą :P
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BananMoutard Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Once upon a time, a nice girl was walking in a forest in a beautiful fall afternoon. Suddenly, she fell on the ground and she got stuck in the rails. She tried to release herself, but she can't. So, she waited and wish that someone will come to rescue her before the train of 6:00p.m. comes...
(Sorry for my bad English and my awful story... Very beautiful picture by the way! :iconawwwplz:)
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks! your story is fine, it's nice you shared it :D
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:iconbananmoutard:
BananMoutard Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
:iconnouplz: Thanks to you to share your beautiful picture to the rest of the world! :iconlawooplz:
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice photo shoots you have in your gallery and your model is quite a cutie :)
There's definitely no need for "sexy ponies" to be included. Why would they want that anyway???? o_O
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sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a lot! I don't quite get the "ponies" cliche, yet I see a lot of them in peoples' profiles, maybe that's some kind of fetish?
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's more like a Fandom (but I guess it can be a fetish to some too lol). Trust me, you don't want to get involved in this one. Stay away from it. You have been warned. XD
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:iconlexlight92:
LexLight92 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
Awesome!
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!
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:iconlexlight92:
LexLight92 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
You're welcome! ;)
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:iconxephyriel:
Xephyriel Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012   Digital Artist
MOVEEE DON'T GET HIT BY TRAIN NUU!! TOO BEAUTIFUL! D:!!!!!!
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:iconnightshade255:
Nightshade255 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CHOO CHOO MOTHERFUCKER
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:iconroaviena:
Roaviena Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
lol
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:iconshadow-crystol:
Shadow-Crystol Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
what would ya do if a train started comming? at like wrong time...
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:iconnightshadow150:
Nightshadow150 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well done :clap:
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!
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:iconbrandi3981:
brandi3981 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
broken doll was my first thought
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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:icondracoartemis:
DracoArtemis Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its unwise to lie on the train tracks :trollface:
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:iconroysaladykiller:
RoysAladyKiller Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
BOOBIES!!!
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:iconpalannabb:
palannabb Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
What an image, it is just so thought provoking, really incredible and well thought out - did you think it out, or did it just happen?
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you, we've prepared for it and thought it over for several days :)
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:iconsquirrelrant:
Squirrelrant Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She likes trains.
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Minority119 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
you know what?
it doesn't need "sexy ponies", what it needs is a shifty looking guy with a top hat and a long black cape twirling his long and swirly mustache
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sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
maybe we'll pursuit this idea in future works, thank you!
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:iconvampirequeeneffeffia:
VampireQueenEffeffia Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That track looks like it hasn't been used in quite some time. Very lovely ^_^
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist
0A0 she does look like a doll laying there like that, shed probly look more like a corpse in a different color i think its just the pink an pokadots that make it more doll like *smoke starts comeing out of ears from over thinking this*
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:iconrudobikukatsuyo:
RudobikuKatsuyo Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a single serious comment. Lolz
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
your could have been the first one... ;)
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:iconrudobikukatsuyo:
RudobikuKatsuyo Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It almost was, heh.
I only forgot to say I love her eyes.
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:icondarknessrequiems:
DarknessRequiems Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOW WAIT FOR THE TRAIN BITCH






















just kidding x3
nice shot :3
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:iconfaithfeather:
Faithfeather Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
worst place to pass out ever x3
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:iconanastasiyacemetery:
anastasiyacemetery Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are you know how working toilets in the trains? )
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:iconsentimentalcannibal:
sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
nope, you tell me :P
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MoltoFuckingBene Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
That looks VERY uncomfortable haha. Awesome shot tho!
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sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks, bro. ;)
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:iconn3ffshark:
N3ffShark Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I imagined a girl who found a train track set, who lived in some land that had none. She started to play around, got bored, and went to lay down... Then... She never woke up. :I The train made sure of it...

It's morbid.
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:iconrainy-bleu:
Rainy-bleu Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like trains
:iconiliketrainsplz:
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:icongfither:
GFITHER Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Choo choo :iconloolfaceplz:
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:iconlizzo79:
lizzo79 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
don't do it!!
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:icondemonladybecky:
DemonLadyBecky Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Even though it's just a picture it makes me scared that something's going to come along and squish her D:
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:iconjosephdunphy:
josephdunphy Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not an unreasonable fear. I'm thinking of a photographer who was doing this beautiful work shooting down tracks near Gary. (It's an half abandoned industrial city about 40 miles to the east of Chicago, slightly southerly). He made these ants eye views, laying on his belly and shooting ahead. Very dramatic. Too dramatic, in fact - he got killed.

The problem with the plan of just looking at the train schedule is that sometimes a freight run comes through when it's not expected.
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DemonLadyBecky Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds scary D;
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:iconjosephdunphy:
josephdunphy Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But it's still a good photo.
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mangasockattack Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely shoot!
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sentimentalcannibal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :)
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