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Submitted: November 16, 2012
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wasted redouxby =sentimentalcannibal

Photography / People & Portraits / Glamour Portraits

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the idea that we started shooting the photos was that we wanted to show the corpse, possibly a victim of the crime left on the rails so that the next train would "clean up" the traces leading to the murderer.

later it came to me, that it looks like a broken doll somebody threw out when it's no longer needed.

choose your own interpretation, i'm curious what's your story...

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wasted redoux by =sentimentalcannibal ( Suggested by *tenchibaka and Featured by ^DistortedSmile )

Critique by ~Ashenta94 Dec 5, 2012, 1:02:41 PM

This is an incredibly moving photograph; it lulls me into a daydream where I try to imagine what this red shoed, polka dotted dressed girl is doing laying on those tracks....did she jump off her train? Did she see off a lover? Is she accepting the idea of death peacefully?
The model's expression is perfect for sparking my imagination because it really is impossible to gauge just what she is feeling. She could be looking up to the sky in a dazed stupor, she could be praying to her god up in the clouds. She makes me think 'I wish I knew what is going on inside your head' and to me, that shows just how talented you are.
Also, this photo has been taken at the exactly perfect angle. She is the subject, but she would be lost if there were any other background.
Exceedingly brilliant job.
Sincerely,
-Ashenta

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*voremenow Feb 14, 2013

I like your take on the murder. I think the murderer is going to get nabbed. First the tracks get little use. this suggests that some one will come by and find the body.
Even if a train comes by unless the head gets mangled there will be dental records to be used for identificaton.
The body is resting low so there may be enough clearence so it may not be draged along and get ripped apart. The hands an feet may be only removed. Should it be a slow moving train, there should be there will be enough time to stop. So another sick twisted perp removed from society. Life in prison no parol.
Nice work!

=sentimentalcannibal Feb 16, 2013 Hobbyist Photographer

I like how you developed the story, thank you!

*voremenow Feb 16, 2013

This was easy. the ay your model is dressed I would title the story A valintines day gone wrong. I like to think she helod her breath topass out and fake death. She's too pretty. i want her to get away.

~namzio Dec 8, 2012

do you know where all the things from train toilet go? yeah...

=sentimentalcannibal Dec 8, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Wiem. A wiesz, że w pociągach towarowych nie ma kibelków? Bo inne po tych torach nie jeżdżą

~BananMoutard Dec 7, 2012

Once upon a time, a nice girl was walking in a forest in a beautiful fall afternoon. Suddenly, she fell on the ground and she got stuck in the rails. She tried to release herself, but she can't. So, she waited and wish that someone will come to rescue her before the train of 6:00p.m. comes...
(Sorry for my bad English and my awful story... Very beautiful picture by the way!

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